Breathe deep on my neck
Love embrace in island dream
Leaves fall all around
Love embrace in island dream
Leaves fall all around
Bay Rum Traditional Haiku Contest
- Thread starter August West
- Start date
Head quakes, razor shakes,
half-remembered bout of grog,
hair of bay rum dog.
half-remembered bout of grog,
hair of bay rum dog.
Sad you cannot sling
syllables like Hemingway?
Settle for his splash.
syllables like Hemingway?
Settle for his splash.
Bartender by night,
working days as a barber,
pours Bay Rum and Coke
working days as a barber,
pours Bay Rum and Coke
Just as with bay rum,
starting haikus I figured
I'd only try one
starting haikus I figured
I'd only try one
Drinking rum at night,
splashing Bay Rum in the morn.
Ah, this is the life!
(still not in! ... but this is fun!)
splashing Bay Rum in the morn.
Ah, this is the life!
(still not in! ... but this is fun!)
- Thread starter
- #87
This is going to be a real challenge to judge.
I am going to leave it open until September 1st, 2015.
I am going to leave it open until September 1st, 2015.
Gazzer girds his haiku loins.
Bay rum bay rum bay
Rum bay rum bay rum bay rum
Bay rum bay rum rum.
Rum bay rum bay rum bay rum
Bay rum bay rum rum.
Pokemon, Bay Rum...
How is one like the other?
Gotta catch em all!
How is one like the other?
Gotta catch em all!
Dang!! Beat me to it. This is a great thread. I haven't even thought about haikus since 4th-5th grade. Too funny.
West Indies bay rum
The islands sacred bay leaf
Ghosts of St Thomas
The islands sacred bay leaf
Ghosts of St Thomas
Eyes looking distant
Contentment to start the day
Temba with Bay Rum
Contentment to start the day
Temba with Bay Rum
- Thread starter
- #98
lol!
Don't pick him, pick me.
I've no convincing reason,
I just want you to.
I've no convincing reason,
I just want you to.
You don't pick Bay Rum
Once you have tried it-oh my
Bay Rum has picked you
Once you have tried it-oh my
Bay Rum has picked you
