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OldSaw

The wife's investment
Read this first.

Hi my name is Dennis.

I'm from the state of confusion, formerly from the state of intoxication. I live in the small town of Chaos which is a suburb of Hysteria.
 

OldSaw

The wife's investment
Thanks for the feedback. I wasn't feeling real good about this one and am not sure how to introduce myself. I'll have to come up with something new.
 
Doesn't work for me, either.

Years ago I saw Richard Belzer perform @ Caroline's here in the city. He came onstage to thunderous clapping & music. As soon as the applause died away, he looked at a woman sitting up front. She had her foot resting lightly on the stage.

"Excuse me, ma'am, are you in show business?" he asked, very nicely.

"No," she said.

"Then get your f*ing FOOT off the f*ing STAGE," he yelled.

The crowd went nuts. I nearly spit out my drink.

Now THAT'S funny.

Evan
 
I find judging jokes solely on the line itself very difficult, as even a talented comic can make not so funny material work with a great delivery.
 

OldSaw

The wife's investment
Thanks again for all the constructive feedback. You guys are great. I was afraid of getting just a bunch of thumbs down votes and no replies to help me reformulate.
 
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